And I was so fussy about the program working this afternoon. I know the font size is correct. for some wierd reason the CPU at the office works better on the blog then my CPU at home. I'm glad you liked it.
Well, there are some words missing or out of place here and there, but the script itself is really great, D'. Everyone is perfectly in character, and for some reason, I like that tiny exchange between AndrAIa and Dot.
This really well-done. You blew my secret weapon! Bob would certainly become Matrix's boss, eventually learning that acting outside the law is necessary and that Matrix will inevitably become his instrument of destruction. Oh well. There's still more secrets to be revealed. :)
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Haruhi commented 4 years ago
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Good job on the script! It wouldn't fit right for either of the two if Bob lets Matrix call him "sir". Poor Bob...
Starbat commented 4 years ago
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Wow. Nice one. This is some impressive writing. Very dramatic and true to the characters. Great work!
Slackbot commented 4 years ago
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I like this scene very much. It's vivid and makes me want more. Good job.
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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That was so awesome! All characters and relationships are perfect! That script should be used as it is for the comics!
Azalea commented 4 years ago
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I nominate you for a cookie. Your script nailed down the characters perfectly! Good job.
LadyLazuli commented 4 years ago
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Sweet script! *poffers plate of cookies*
divinerose... commented 4 years ago
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And I was so fussy about the program working this afternoon. I know the font size is correct. for some wierd reason the CPU at the office works better on the blog then my CPU at home. I'm glad you liked it.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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Well, there are some words missing or out of place here and there, but the script itself is really great, D'. Everyone is perfectly in character, and for some reason, I like that tiny exchange between AndrAIa and Dot.
Cheers!
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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This really well-done. You blew my secret weapon! Bob would certainly become Matrix's boss, eventually learning that acting outside the law is necessary and that Matrix will inevitably become his instrument of destruction. Oh well. There's still more secrets to be revealed. :)
Please PM me your address so I can send you a cookie!
aqualac commented 4 years ago
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Soooo good. Very, very nice! *is in awe*