D'awww, I like it. It's short, sweet and a valiant attempt.
I don't do fanfics, but all I can suggest is to keep writing them and see if you can get an English-speaking person to proof read it after you've written it. That way you will definitely improve!
Thanks!!!!
I'm writing actually my second (and more extense) fanfic!
I hope, this method can help me with my english (one week ago, I was not able to say any english word!!!), while I enjoy and meet new people!
Weeb92 commented 1 year ago
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D'awww, I like it. It's short, sweet and a valiant attempt.
I don't do fanfics, but all I can suggest is to keep writing them and see if you can get an English-speaking person to proof read it after you've written it. That way you will definitely improve!
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AndrAIa780... commented 1 year ago
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Thanks!!!!
I'm writing actually my second (and more extense) fanfic!
I hope, this method can help me with my english (one week ago, I was not able to say any english word!!!), while I enjoy and meet new people!
Thanks again! :DD
anamolie commented 1 year ago
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It is interesting. I like it. It seems like a flashback.
The english was okay to understand. You did good.
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AndrAIa780... commented 1 year ago
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Thaaanks!!! :D
I'm very happy with the comments and with the fic's results!