Okay. Here goes. The Professor said we could try both so I did. I have to confess that I had more trouble making three pages then doing one page. I actually had to fill the end with a bounce off the existing script to finish it.
Think of it as flatterly Professor.
The font looks like its bigger then 12 point Courier again. And its not cooperating. Darn bugs!
INT: REBEL BUNKER – KITTS SECTOR
The garage is busy with secret forces planning to liberate Mainframe yet again. As troops scramble to prepare arms, Matrix and AndrAIa walk through the craziness, towards Dot's Office.
MATRIX
Didn’t we just go through all this before?
ANDRAIA
We all feel betrayed Sparky. We really thought Gnosis would fix everything. Not make it worse.
Matrix glances at Lens and Ether standing outside the Nullfire. He flashes them a look which Ether returns in kind.
MATRIX
We never should have trusted Codemasters.
ANDRAIA
It wasn’t our decision Matrix. It was Turbo and the guardians.
MATRIX
Yeah. And look at what it got them.
INT: DOT’S OFFICE
Bob and Dot are waiting as Matrix and AndrAIa enter. Bob looks as if he is in a daze. It’s obvious that he is deeply shaken by Turbo’s death.
MATRIX
Bob? You wanted to see us?
Dot touches Bob's arm to snap him out of his shock.
ANDRAIA
Are you all right Bob?
BOB (speaking to Glitch)
Glitch. Prepare playback.
Bob looks up at Matrix and AndrAIa.
BOB
I received a last holo vid of instructions from Turbo. It's his last requests. The email attachment asked for you to be here.
ANDRAIA
Bob... we're sorry about what happened.
MATRIX (angry)
You should have taken me with you! We could have-!
BOB (equal anger)
Not now Matrix!
There is an awkward moments break in the conversation. Bob clears his throat.
BOB
Glitch. Playback.
Glitch projects a small holographic image of Turbo onto the table. Turbo speaks directly to Bob.
TURBO
Bob. If you've received this message you know what's happened. I've been deleted in the line of duty.
As you know the Guardian Council is in charge of picking a successor by vote. But in the chance that the Council has been deleted as well, this holo vid would be automatically sent to a Guardian I have personally selected as my replacement. Obviously that guardian is you.
The three other sprites look at Bob in surprise.
TURBO
I know you're thinking I must be completely random considering how much we've clashed over policy in the past. It's why I had you bring Matrix here. In light of the situation regarding the Hunt, I granted him the rank of full Guardian and gave him Special Ops status as an enforcer.
Now everyone stares at Matrix in disbelief.
MATRIX
Oh boy.
TURBO
Bob. I hope you'll forgive me for not telling you this. Over the hours you've shown me what a guardian can be made of. Your faith in what you belief has been unshakeable. And I'm sure you'll have as many clashes over the decisions you'll have to make as we have. This is a big responsibility I am laying on your shoulders, but I know with friends like you have, you've got the best back up in the Net. It's all up to you now Prime Guardian Bob. Don't worrying about letting me down anymore. Don't let the Net down. We're counting on you.
The transmission terminates. There is a long awkward staring match between Bob and Matrix. Matrix finally breaks the silence.
MATRIX
I didn't tell anyone Bob. Not Dot. Not even AndrAIa. Turbo wanted to keep it classified.
(pause)
It doesn't mean Turbo didn't trust you. It was his decision. How could I say no to this chance. I wanted to -."
BOB (interrupting)
Guardian Matrix.
Matrix draws himself into a more attentive expression.
MATRIX
Yes sir.
BOB
First thing. Don't call me sir. I'm always going to be Bob to you.
(pause)
Second, you know the situation as it stands. We need the User back. I need you to assemble a team, get to the Web and beat that game. Dot will do everything we can to free Mainframe and figure out how to stop Gnosis.
MATRIX
Yes S-. I mean Bob.
BOB
And Matrix? Be careful.
Bob reaches out his hand towards Matrix. Matrix shakes Bob's hand.
BOB
And congratulations on the promotion. Guardian Matrix.
MATRIX
Thanks Bob.
Bob quickly turns and exits the room with saying another word.
MATRIX
We're going a ship. I'd better talk to Ether. Or at least try to talk to Ether.
Matrix exits the room as well. AndrAIa and Dot look at each other for support.
ANDRAIA
Are you okay?
DOT
I was going to ask you the same thing.
ANDRAIA
Bob is in shock. You handle your end and I'll handle mine, right?
DOT
AndrAIa? Good luck.
ANDRAIA
You too.
AndrAIa leaves to find Matrix. Dot exits through the same door Bob has used.
EXT: WATCH TOWER - NIGHT
Dot enters the look out post to see Bob standing at the rail looking out over at the Principal Office. The spire of the Microprocessor installed by the Avatars pulses with an unnatural red, casting a menacing that reverberates outward. The top of the spire holds the Principal Office sub sphere like the claw of a monstrous hand. Dot walks over to him and puts her arm around his waist.
DOT
Bob?
The guardian looks at her a moment. Even in the pale light Dot can make out the tract of a tear that has run down his face. Dot puts her arms around him and lets him hug her.
Haruhi commented 4 years ago
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Good job on the script! It wouldn't fit right for either of the two if Bob lets Matrix call him "sir". Poor Bob...
Starbat commented 4 years ago
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Wow. Nice one. This is some impressive writing. Very dramatic and true to the characters. Great work!
Slackbot commented 4 years ago
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I like this scene very much. It's vivid and makes me want more. Good job.
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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That was so awesome! All characters and relationships are perfect! That script should be used as it is for the comics!
Azalea commented 4 years ago
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I nominate you for a cookie. Your script nailed down the characters perfectly! Good job.
LadyLazuli commented 4 years ago
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Sweet script! *poffers plate of cookies*
divinerose... commented 4 years ago
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And I was so fussy about the program working this afternoon. I know the font size is correct. for some wierd reason the CPU at the office works better on the blog then my CPU at home. I'm glad you liked it.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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Well, there are some words missing or out of place here and there, but the script itself is really great, D'. Everyone is perfectly in character, and for some reason, I like that tiny exchange between AndrAIa and Dot.
Cheers!
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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This really well-done. You blew my secret weapon! Bob would certainly become Matrix's boss, eventually learning that acting outside the law is necessary and that Matrix will inevitably become his instrument of destruction. Oh well. There's still more secrets to be revealed. :)
Please PM me your address so I can send you a cookie!
aqualac commented 4 years ago
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Soooo good. Very, very nice! *is in awe*