I look forward as to how Lens will be incorporated into your story. However, would you also consider making Lens a character that is neither a protagonist nor antagonist, but a person that works only for himself? Judging from your character description, he seems like he could be another anti-hero. It'd be nice to "spice things up a bit" and not have everyone be considered to be good or bad.
I definitely think you got the characterization for Lens pretty much dead on to what he was in his only appearance, and exactly what he should be. Good work.
I especially like the mention of his loyalty to Bob, because I really felt like those two could make a really effective team if they ever met up again, and were fighting for the same cause.
As everyone else has said, your characterization of Lens is really great; I really can't wait to see more of him and I think he's going to make a really great transition from a minor character with only one appearance in Season 2 to one of the main cast in Arrival.
I can see him thinking himself being superior to other sprites, as Codemasters, from the description, have surpassed normal boundaries and skills beyond "did you want fries with that?"
[cont'd]...history always repeats itself with the whole mentality of "We're a superior force that'll fight off anything!" Anything but Gnosis.
I'd imagine they eventually see the error in not taking care of the problem before it became to great for them to handle.
Excellent job on the characterization! I still want to see him more fleshed out like in 2.0. Maybe all that armor he has on is just that? Keep the same insectoid, skinny overall look? In 2.0, after all, Bob couldn't tell that Lens wasn't from the 'Net. Perhaps he had a nasty brush with it, thus the obvious scarring and degradation that had Bob thinking he was from the Web? I'm still working on that concept sketch. Nice citations, by the way, good way to tie it all in.
WiGgY commented 4 years ago
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I really think this characterization is spot on. 100%. Don't change a thing.
Haruhi commented 4 years ago
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I look forward as to how Lens will be incorporated into your story. However, would you also consider making Lens a character that is neither a protagonist nor antagonist, but a person that works only for himself? Judging from your character description, he seems like he could be another anti-hero. It'd be nice to "spice things up a bit" and not have everyone be considered to be good or bad.
Stimulatio... commented 4 years ago
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sounds really good, Reminded me of the Matrix in the second paragraph.
And reminds me of HK47, which is always a good thing. Sounds like a great character to add to the ReBoot cast.
DredZed commented 4 years ago
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I definitely think you got the characterization for Lens pretty much dead on to what he was in his only appearance, and exactly what he should be. Good work.
I especially like the mention of his loyalty to Bob, because I really felt like those two could make a really effective team if they ever met up again, and were fighting for the same cause.
Kasandora commented 4 years ago
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As everyone else has said, your characterization of Lens is really great; I really can't wait to see more of him and I think he's going to make a really great transition from a minor character with only one appearance in Season 2 to one of the main cast in Arrival.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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I can see him thinking himself being superior to other sprites, as Codemasters, from the description, have surpassed normal boundaries and skills beyond "did you want fries with that?"
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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Still, it's hard to believe the other Codemasters would be so incredibly near-sighted, but then again,
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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[cont'd]...history always repeats itself with the whole mentality of "We're a superior force that'll fight off anything!" Anything but Gnosis.
I'd imagine they eventually see the error in not taking care of the problem before it became to great for them to handle.
Excellent job on the characterization! I still want to see him more fleshed out like in 2.0. Maybe all that armor he has on is just that? Keep the same insectoid, skinny overall look? In 2.0, after all, Bob couldn't tell that Lens wasn't from the 'Net. Perhaps he had a nasty brush with it, thus the obvious scarring and degradation that had Bob thinking he was from the Web? I'm still working on that concept sketch. Nice citations, by the way, good way to tie it all in.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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I meant to say 2.2. XD There's a bad typo.