Here's a little more resistance on deleting Turbo. He may not have been in too many episodes overall, but I too would rather he be incapacitated then deleted for good.
Azalea: I have no idea if/how I'll be involved in future ReBoot properties. User knows I'll try to shoehorn my way in there somehow...
WeBViRuS: Thanks for the script praise. Many people have pointed out various criticisms, so don't worry about making any yourself.
acrimonious1: Answers to your questions/comments:
1./2. Yeah, good question - but more importantly, who else is gonna do it? Seems like he might eb the only choice. Maybe that's the drama - he's thrust into the position but longs to return to Mainframe. I dunno...
3. Hmmm... maybe a power struggle? Everyone wants Bob to be the new Prime Guardian but other Guardians are objecting? Could be an interesting episode.
Your comments on Turbo are received and stored. Maybe I'm jumping the gun on Turbo, but I've had little resistance on offing him so it's hard to say. Thanks for making me think about it, at least.
Snorting milk from: [I guess that means we're a real boy now.] and [It's like mint-flavored viral :D]
Speaking my mind: LadyLazuil, thanks for putting it into words.
Reading that script was so great. I have to say, Megabyte's speech reflects his character really well. He always wanted perfection and order, though it was his own version of order, meaning policing. The fact that he's advertising things in this manner to the People is very deceitful...and spot-on. Don't know about the chesty-slammey though. Oh, Hitler, I get it! XD
"How much did those pom-poms cost?!" Gold! I lol-ed. Then a cheesy Matrix/AndrAIa moment between them. Better enjoy it, 'cause things are gonna get ugly. ;)
I'm sorry, but Dot does seem a bit Andyish in that moment. Or maybe she's just grown her spine back over time? Maybe what she should have said was "No one [should] hold you responsible for this." ;D
This round was a fun read. I had a feeling from the previous script that there wasn't much to work with using a focused crew intent on their moment. At least here we get a much better feel for your portrayal of the characters. I say overall, very yes.
I'll get to answering these comments tomorrow night. For now, go read the new script! V2! It's cool! Formatting's a little wonky, but I'll get it fixed tomorrow.
Thankyou for linking to the post where my ideas are! I am terrible at the intro to a topic. I now know what to write about my idea. Thankyou for the compliment! Just a quick question: if you guys win, will you help in producing the movie?
To think that once again there's a professional team somewhere out there getting a ReBoot plot together... I still can't believe all this has happened.
I admit it, I really had given up that there'd still be any attention paid to ReBoot, or its fans. I had accepted that. The most I had hoped out of the Revival for up until three days ago (when I got online after 5 weeks) was a DVD rerelease. Now all my hopes have changed, or else have been answered entirely. This whole thing blows my mind. Cheesy as it may sound, I mean it— my dream really has come true... And the fact that we're part of the effort makes it all the more priceless.
I can't think of anything to change regarding Arrival either as of right now— let's see what you all have in store for us next, then we can bombard you with tons and tons more comments!
Ok, I've gone over everything for Arrival and I can't currently come up with anything in my mind that needs to be changed(which is a very good thing I think...).
I like that you'll be adding a new benign virus character, Vector. His way of worming into things is really intriguing.
The Web Game will take some work to get it just right, but I feel this team is up to the task!
The GNOSIS plot is coming together very nicely, I hope we get to read this in full one day.
TurboFool: I'm not kidding here... you're comments were very moving to me. As you all know, none of the pitch writers have been "discovered." It's amazing to me that I might be witnessing my own threshold moment here. You know.. first act turning point and all that.
TurtleDreamer: *Even the hecklers have served a purpose, though probably not what they intended.* Shhhh! We can't have them find out!
singingbanana: *My only broader criticism is I feel you may have over-egged the pudding.* This is a very real fear for me. See the bottom of this comment for my opinions on that...
acrimonious1: *Maybe it's just me but I'd like to see what a fully powered Turbo can do.* You know, you're right. He needs to go out in a blaze of glory... probably saving Bob or Matrix in the process.
Many people have commented now that they feel we can *summon the spirit of ReBoot.* This almost puts a lump in my throat, because I know for a fact that simply winning this contest is only the beginning.
Once we're done here, the winning group will have to retreat behind the wizard's curtain and begin crafting the real story. Things are gonna have to change. We will have to make decisions that we fear will disappoint you... but we must have the courage to do the sorts of things that initially pissed you off in the original show (Matrix and Andy as adults) so that you can be pleasantly surprised later. I'm somewhat heartened to hear that you guys might be ready to allow us to do that.
GlitchBob commented 4 years ago
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Here's a little more resistance on deleting Turbo. He may not have been in too many episodes overall, but I too would rather he be incapacitated then deleted for good.
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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Azalea: I have no idea if/how I'll be involved in future ReBoot properties. User knows I'll try to shoehorn my way in there somehow...
WeBViRuS: Thanks for the script praise. Many people have pointed out various criticisms, so don't worry about making any yourself.
acrimonious1: Answers to your questions/comments:
1./2. Yeah, good question - but more importantly, who else is gonna do it? Seems like he might eb the only choice. Maybe that's the drama - he's thrust into the position but longs to return to Mainframe. I dunno...
3. Hmmm... maybe a power struggle? Everyone wants Bob to be the new Prime Guardian but other Guardians are objecting? Could be an interesting episode.
Your comments on Turbo are received and stored. Maybe I'm jumping the gun on Turbo, but I've had little resistance on offing him so it's hard to say. Thanks for making me think about it, at least.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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Snorting milk from: [I guess that means we're a real boy now.] and [It's like mint-flavored viral :D]
Speaking my mind: LadyLazuil, thanks for putting it into words.
Reading that script was so great. I have to say, Megabyte's speech reflects his character really well. He always wanted perfection and order, though it was his own version of order, meaning policing. The fact that he's advertising things in this manner to the People is very deceitful...and spot-on. Don't know about the chesty-slammey though. Oh, Hitler, I get it! XD
"How much did those pom-poms cost?!" Gold! I lol-ed. Then a cheesy Matrix/AndrAIa moment between them. Better enjoy it, 'cause things are gonna get ugly. ;)
I'm sorry, but Dot does seem a bit Andyish in that moment. Or maybe she's just grown her spine back over time? Maybe what she should have said was "No one [should] hold you responsible for this." ;D
This round was a fun read. I had a feeling from the previous script that there wasn't much to work with using a focused crew intent on their moment. At least here we get a much better feel for your portrayal of the characters. I say overall, very yes.
Azalea commented 4 years ago
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To Arrival Producer
Tomorrow I will have my first blog up and it will have the fleshed out version of my idea. I need to figure out where info-datas live.
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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I'll get to answering these comments tomorrow night. For now, go read the new script! V2! It's cool! Formatting's a little wonky, but I'll get it fixed tomorrow.
Azalea commented 4 years ago
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To Arrival Producer
Thankyou for linking to the post where my ideas are! I am terrible at the intro to a topic. I now know what to write about my idea. Thankyou for the compliment! Just a quick question: if you guys win, will you help in producing the movie?
LadyLazuli commented 4 years ago
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To think that once again there's a professional team somewhere out there getting a ReBoot plot together... I still can't believe all this has happened.
I admit it, I really had given up that there'd still be any attention paid to ReBoot, or its fans. I had accepted that. The most I had hoped out of the Revival for up until three days ago (when I got online after 5 weeks) was a DVD rerelease. Now all my hopes have changed, or else have been answered entirely. This whole thing blows my mind. Cheesy as it may sound, I mean it— my dream really has come true... And the fact that we're part of the effort makes it all the more priceless.
I can't think of anything to change regarding Arrival either as of right now— let's see what you all have in store for us next, then we can bombard you with tons and tons more comments!
Keep up the great work!
GlitchBob commented 4 years ago
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Ok, I've gone over everything for Arrival and I can't currently come up with anything in my mind that needs to be changed(which is a very good thing I think...).
I like that you'll be adding a new benign virus character, Vector. His way of worming into things is really intriguing.
The Web Game will take some work to get it just right, but I feel this team is up to the task!
The GNOSIS plot is coming together very nicely, I hope we get to read this in full one day.
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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TurboFool: I'm not kidding here... you're comments were very moving to me. As you all know, none of the pitch writers have been "discovered." It's amazing to me that I might be witnessing my own threshold moment here. You know.. first act turning point and all that.
TurtleDreamer: *Even the hecklers have served a purpose, though probably not what they intended.* Shhhh! We can't have them find out!
singingbanana: *My only broader criticism is I feel you may have over-egged the pudding.* This is a very real fear for me. See the bottom of this comment for my opinions on that...
acrimonious1: *Maybe it's just me but I'd like to see what a fully powered Turbo can do.* You know, you're right. He needs to go out in a blaze of glory... probably saving Bob or Matrix in the process.
Many people have commented now that they feel we can *summon the spirit of ReBoot.* This almost puts a lump in my throat, because I know for a fact that simply winning this contest is only the beginning.
Once we're done here, the winning group will have to retreat behind the wizard's curtain and begin crafting the real story. Things are gonna have to change. We will have to make decisions that we fear will disappoint you... but we must have the courage to do the sorts of things that initially pissed you off in the original show (Matrix and Andy as adults) so that you can be pleasantly surprised later. I'm somewhat heartened to hear that you guys might be ready to allow us to do that.
LadyLazuli commented 4 years ago
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That's something I've been thinking about too... We'll need to learn more about him first, though. I hope they tell us soon!