This is a truly brilliant piece of artwork overall. My two criticism are as follows:
1. His right shoulder seems to have dislocated.
2. His face doesn't hold quite the right expression for the overall happy feel of the piece. I don't mean, he should have a giant, goofy, clown smile going, I'm just saying put more expression on his face other than just in a smirk. Play with the eyebrows, eyes, etc.
That said, I repeat, great piece. It reminds me a bit of Leinil Yu. And, for a ten minute sketch, that just makes it even more impressive.
Really nice work, I agree. A technical question about graphic display on the site though. Nobody else has mentioned it here, but the picture IS cut off on the right, isn't it? (I'm not the only one seeing that?)
So why did it do that, and how can I keep it from happening when I upload things? I've uploaded a couple things and they've come through just fine - at least they look fine in my browser. But there's this and I was talking w someone else a couple days ago who had a couple shots that weren't cropped, but had been stretched out of proportion somehow.
Is there anything we need to know about making the site play nice with graphics?
Enzo commented 4 years ago
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wow, grate work
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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Yeah! Make the yoyo useful!
divinerose... commented 4 years ago
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Cool! I like the sketchy look.
MorganJ commented 4 years ago
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Hey
Nice work. Very loose feel, has a lot oof energy. Did you do the coloring as well? Keep it up.
MorganJ
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Steven Men... commented 4 years ago
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This is a truly brilliant piece of artwork overall. My two criticism are as follows:
1. His right shoulder seems to have dislocated.
2. His face doesn't hold quite the right expression for the overall happy feel of the piece. I don't mean, he should have a giant, goofy, clown smile going, I'm just saying put more expression on his face other than just in a smirk. Play with the eyebrows, eyes, etc.
That said, I repeat, great piece. It reminds me a bit of Leinil Yu. And, for a ten minute sketch, that just makes it even more impressive.
DoctorNabe... commented 4 years ago
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Really nice work, I agree. A technical question about graphic display on the site though. Nobody else has mentioned it here, but the picture IS cut off on the right, isn't it? (I'm not the only one seeing that?)
So why did it do that, and how can I keep it from happening when I upload things? I've uploaded a couple things and they've come through just fine - at least they look fine in my browser. But there's this and I was talking w someone else a couple days ago who had a couple shots that weren't cropped, but had been stretched out of proportion somehow.
Is there anything we need to know about making the site play nice with graphics?