Actually, Daemon was for =Unity= meaning universal oblivion for all. The whole occultist culling thing. =Soon you will be united, joined it the Word.= She never did say peace, though Turbo and Matrix themselves said spiritually they were =AT peace=. Different meaning though when you apply it spiritually and not to mean as a nation.
I say it could work, but if it's changed to =order= that would be Megabyte's original agenda.
Expanding on Albedo's idea: Mainframe could just look eery. Not many binomes are on the streets and some sectors have just completely disappeared-just random patches of ground where a building should be. That could be an easy symbol to show that MB is just randomly deleting programs.
I really like the feel of this script, it reads just like the show we know and love. However, there are two points that feel a bit like storylines are being regurgitated.
Firstly is megabyte's 'peace', which is what daemon was after. Megabyte has never had to resort to false peace-making speaches before; the viral binomes have always been more than happy to assist him for domination and control in the past, as long as they get a piece of the action. So I don't think megabyte needs to lie.
Secondly is the description on mainframe. I know it's kinda unavoidable, but it does feel too much like the end of season 3, returning back from the web to find mainframe in a similar apocalyptic state. Chaotic destruction is Hex's speciality. I don't think megabyte would destroy for the fun of it, but merely to advance his plans of domination. At the end of The Hunt he had already taken control of the principal office, giving him the control he needs to take other places. Last time he had waged a long war to take the principal office, but not this time, he already has it.
Therefore, I think that this time mainframe should be more a city where on the surface things look right and happy, but underneath megabyte and fear rules supreme.
I didn't get that feeling. O_o I like this portrayal of him, though he should have a more feral and unpredictable nature close-up. However, in that strange season of the show, he did display the ability to spin off a quick yet powerful speech that both had an elegant feel yet a disturbingly menacing undertone. Besides, it's a reference. Not like he hasn't been compared to a Nazi leader before (concentration camps in G-Prime, ep "ID Crisis Pt 2"). He even has a crazy doctor by his side like Hitler did.
Megabyte in this script is a bit OOC. Mainly because you made him megalomaniacal rather than berated psycho, which is how he ended up at the end of S4. I pictured Megabyte of after S4 as an isolated person who stays in his Tor, but when he does emerge, he rarely speaks: just attacks, laughs and goes away. That's just my view.
BobIsSoHot, that reminds me that since Bob was lost in the web, AndrAIa has been saying *Stay frosty* a few times. Bob should say *Hey, that's my line!* and take it back. lol
After reading over what I wrote, I'm glad you see what I mean, as I was unintentionally not blatantly saying what I meant. Heh heh... ^_^;
Anyway, pet names for AndrAIa. Truth betold I kinda liked "Lover" in the sense that it gave the two a more mature relationship. It kinda game them an "all-grown-up" feel. Other pet names? As endian said, there's still Sparky haha! When I try to picture AndrAIa speaking to him... and the first thing that comes to mind is "Guardian." You can bring back the "Guardian" thing, as kind of a nostalgic feel to when they first met, if the story line allows it. I can't really think of any cute pet names though... I'll keep that on the back-burner.
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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I like the use of the word 'order'. I think a minor change to the V2 script is in order.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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Actually, Daemon was for =Unity= meaning universal oblivion for all. The whole occultist culling thing. =Soon you will be united, joined it the Word.= She never did say peace, though Turbo and Matrix themselves said spiritually they were =AT peace=. Different meaning though when you apply it spiritually and not to mean as a nation.
I say it could work, but if it's changed to =order= that would be Megabyte's original agenda.
Raidensbin... commented 4 years ago
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Expanding on Albedo's idea: Mainframe could just look eery. Not many binomes are on the streets and some sectors have just completely disappeared-just random patches of ground where a building should be. That could be an easy symbol to show that MB is just randomly deleting programs.
Albedo commented 4 years ago
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I really like the feel of this script, it reads just like the show we know and love. However, there are two points that feel a bit like storylines are being regurgitated.
Firstly is megabyte's 'peace', which is what daemon was after. Megabyte has never had to resort to false peace-making speaches before; the viral binomes have always been more than happy to assist him for domination and control in the past, as long as they get a piece of the action. So I don't think megabyte needs to lie.
Secondly is the description on mainframe. I know it's kinda unavoidable, but it does feel too much like the end of season 3, returning back from the web to find mainframe in a similar apocalyptic state. Chaotic destruction is Hex's speciality. I don't think megabyte would destroy for the fun of it, but merely to advance his plans of domination. At the end of The Hunt he had already taken control of the principal office, giving him the control he needs to take other places. Last time he had waged a long war to take the principal office, but not this time, he already has it.
Therefore, I think that this time mainframe should be more a city where on the surface things look right and happy, but underneath megabyte and fear rules supreme.
Azalea commented 4 years ago
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That is 100% Reboot!
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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I didn't get that feeling. O_o I like this portrayal of him, though he should have a more feral and unpredictable nature close-up. However, in that strange season of the show, he did display the ability to spin off a quick yet powerful speech that both had an elegant feel yet a disturbingly menacing undertone. Besides, it's a reference. Not like he hasn't been compared to a Nazi leader before (concentration camps in G-Prime, ep "ID Crisis Pt 2"). He even has a crazy doctor by his side like Hitler did.
Raidensbin... commented 4 years ago
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Megabyte in this script is a bit OOC. Mainly because you made him megalomaniacal rather than berated psycho, which is how he ended up at the end of S4. I pictured Megabyte of after S4 as an isolated person who stays in his Tor, but when he does emerge, he rarely speaks: just attacks, laughs and goes away. That's just my view.
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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BobIsSoHot, that reminds me that since Bob was lost in the web, AndrAIa has been saying *Stay frosty* a few times. Bob should say *Hey, that's my line!* and take it back. lol
BobIsSoHot commented 4 years ago
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Whizzywhig you are awesome! I could see everything play out in front of me as I read. Please write some more for us to read!
Dot IS a bean counter; thank you Etoile.
"Pompoms" could be anything; outfits, garters, boas, whatever.
Yeah, Lover was stupid, Sparky was cute, but odd. Let's think of something new. Musclekins?
"Stay frosty!" I am 100% for this pitch. I can't wait to see more!!
aSnowyEven... commented 4 years ago
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After reading over what I wrote, I'm glad you see what I mean, as I was unintentionally not blatantly saying what I meant. Heh heh... ^_^;
Anyway, pet names for AndrAIa. Truth betold I kinda liked "Lover" in the sense that it gave the two a more mature relationship. It kinda game them an "all-grown-up" feel. Other pet names? As endian said, there's still Sparky haha! When I try to picture AndrAIa speaking to him... and the first thing that comes to mind is "Guardian." You can bring back the "Guardian" thing, as kind of a nostalgic feel to when they first met, if the story line allows it. I can't really think of any cute pet names though... I'll keep that on the back-burner.