I really like the feel of this script, it reads just like the show we know and love. However, there are two points that feel a bit like storylines are being regurgitated.
Firstly is megabyte's 'peace', which is what daemon was after. Megabyte has never had to resort to false peace-making speaches before; the viral binomes have always been more than happy to assist him for domination and control in the past, as long as they get a piece of the action. So I don't think megabyte needs to lie.
Secondly is the description on mainframe. I know it's kinda unavoidable, but it does feel too much like the end of season 3, returning back from the web to find mainframe in a similar apocalyptic state. Chaotic destruction is Hex's speciality. I don't think megabyte would destroy for the fun of it, but merely to advance his plans of domination. At the end of The Hunt he had already taken control of the principal office, giving him the control he needs to take other places. Last time he had waged a long war to take the principal office, but not this time, he already has it.
Therefore, I think that this time mainframe should be more a city where on the surface things look right and happy, but underneath megabyte and fear rules supreme.
Expanding on Albedo's idea: Mainframe could just look eery. Not many binomes are on the streets and some sectors have just completely disappeared-just random patches of ground where a building should be. That could be an easy symbol to show that MB is just randomly deleting programs.
Actually, Daemon was for =Unity= meaning universal oblivion for all. The whole occultist culling thing. =Soon you will be united, joined it the Word.= She never did say peace, though Turbo and Matrix themselves said spiritually they were =AT peace=. Different meaning though when you apply it spiritually and not to mean as a nation.
I say it could work, but if it's changed to =order= that would be Megabyte's original agenda.
Albedo commented 4 years ago
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I really like the feel of this script, it reads just like the show we know and love. However, there are two points that feel a bit like storylines are being regurgitated.
Firstly is megabyte's 'peace', which is what daemon was after. Megabyte has never had to resort to false peace-making speaches before; the viral binomes have always been more than happy to assist him for domination and control in the past, as long as they get a piece of the action. So I don't think megabyte needs to lie.
Secondly is the description on mainframe. I know it's kinda unavoidable, but it does feel too much like the end of season 3, returning back from the web to find mainframe in a similar apocalyptic state. Chaotic destruction is Hex's speciality. I don't think megabyte would destroy for the fun of it, but merely to advance his plans of domination. At the end of The Hunt he had already taken control of the principal office, giving him the control he needs to take other places. Last time he had waged a long war to take the principal office, but not this time, he already has it.
Therefore, I think that this time mainframe should be more a city where on the surface things look right and happy, but underneath megabyte and fear rules supreme.
Raidensbin... commented 4 years ago
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Expanding on Albedo's idea: Mainframe could just look eery. Not many binomes are on the streets and some sectors have just completely disappeared-just random patches of ground where a building should be. That could be an easy symbol to show that MB is just randomly deleting programs.
WeBViRuS commented 4 years ago
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Actually, Daemon was for =Unity= meaning universal oblivion for all. The whole occultist culling thing. =Soon you will be united, joined it the Word.= She never did say peace, though Turbo and Matrix themselves said spiritually they were =AT peace=. Different meaning though when you apply it spiritually and not to mean as a nation.
I say it could work, but if it's changed to =order= that would be Megabyte's original agenda.
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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I like the use of the word 'order'. I think a minor change to the V2 script is in order.