Ha. That's super. I like how you maintained the user-rebooter communication barrier. So long as it stays maintained, I'll be happy to see this scenario in the pitch.
That's more the kind of thing Dot would say. lol I mean, would AndrAIa really mind if Matrix was looking at her outfit? Unless he was fixing her breasts like a pervert, but he wasn't, right? :-p
I think that the game would acknowledge their existence even if they didn't reboot. Remember the 'dinosaur' shooting at Megabyte in When Games Collide? Otherwise, they would just have to not reboot to make sure that they do not get killed.
That's... more or less what I was trying to get across, with AndrAIa... >_>
About the game acknowledging them... This is supposed to be an ONLINE game, where you typically have to log-in in order to play. That's basically why I wrote that in there. That, and the Usernames bit, for Vector's entrance.
Oh, you made Matrix look at AndrAIa's breasts? You, bad boy! :-p lol But I don't think it fits Matrix's character. She has been wearing nothing but a bra for two seasons, if he was the kind of guy who forgets where is the face, he would have done it before. It's weird, it seems like he all of a sudden realized that she had breasts. There are two characters we saw eyeing another: Bob looking at Dot's tail and Hex looking at Bob's ASCII. I think we should keep that stuff for them. It would be like giving a broken car to Matrix. He could have a broken car, but it's so much more appropriate for Bob.
He should look at her in a general view respectfully, which means body AND face. And if AndrAIa says 'eyes up here', she should say it just to tease him, knowing he wasn't looking at her breast.
What does n00b mean exactly? Sorry, I never played online games before...
That was pretty funny. Good formatting and action descriptions too (I have trouble with keeping those short).
Your script brings up a lot of interesting issues... Giving the Users individual names and having them speak l33t makes them seem very recognizable as humans, but not to the heroes. That's very different from the old Reboot - but the old ReBoot was only that way because the present technology level didn't let people engage with each other on computers in a recognizably human way.
This is making me wonder whether the l33t option is better or worse than simply making the Users play in-character (they are RPing) and leave it at that. At least that would allow a solid story. Hmmm...
I'm adding your name to the cookie list, which presently includes you and singingbanana for his foolscap comic. Send me a PM with your address please. Thanks dude!
singingban... commented 4 years ago
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Hey! Loved it :)
aSnowyEven... commented 4 years ago
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I very much enjoyed the "WTF N00B IMA TELL ADMIN" line. I like it. ^_^
Briseis commented 4 years ago
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Great job! I think you painted a clear picture of the characters through their dialogue.
Starbat commented 4 years ago
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Ha. That's super. I like how you maintained the user-rebooter communication barrier. So long as it stays maintained, I'll be happy to see this scenario in the pitch.
Jester17 commented 4 years ago
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This is great, and I agree with aSnowyEvening's comment.
I say we keep The script from the V3 pitch and this one.
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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*Eyes up here, Sparky*
That's more the kind of thing Dot would say. lol I mean, would AndrAIa really mind if Matrix was looking at her outfit? Unless he was fixing her breasts like a pervert, but he wasn't, right? :-p
I think that the game would acknowledge their existence even if they didn't reboot. Remember the 'dinosaur' shooting at Megabyte in When Games Collide? Otherwise, they would just have to not reboot to make sure that they do not get killed.
The 'dialogues' with the users are hilarious!
Good job!
Shadowbolt commented 4 years ago
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That's... more or less what I was trying to get across, with AndrAIa... >_>
About the game acknowledging them... This is supposed to be an ONLINE game, where you typically have to log-in in order to play. That's basically why I wrote that in there. That, and the Usernames bit, for Vector's entrance.
aqualac commented 4 years ago
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Your "n00b" stuff totally cracked me up... seriously. My sis looked at me like I was completely random...
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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Oh, you made Matrix look at AndrAIa's breasts? You, bad boy! :-p lol But I don't think it fits Matrix's character. She has been wearing nothing but a bra for two seasons, if he was the kind of guy who forgets where is the face, he would have done it before. It's weird, it seems like he all of a sudden realized that she had breasts. There are two characters we saw eyeing another: Bob looking at Dot's tail and Hex looking at Bob's ASCII. I think we should keep that stuff for them. It would be like giving a broken car to Matrix. He could have a broken car, but it's so much more appropriate for Bob.
He should look at her in a general view respectfully, which means body AND face. And if AndrAIa says 'eyes up here', she should say it just to tease him, knowing he wasn't looking at her breast.
What does n00b mean exactly? Sorry, I never played online games before...
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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That was pretty funny. Good formatting and action descriptions too (I have trouble with keeping those short).
Your script brings up a lot of interesting issues... Giving the Users individual names and having them speak l33t makes them seem very recognizable as humans, but not to the heroes. That's very different from the old Reboot - but the old ReBoot was only that way because the present technology level didn't let people engage with each other on computers in a recognizably human way.
This is making me wonder whether the l33t option is better or worse than simply making the Users play in-character (they are RPing) and leave it at that. At least that would allow a solid story. Hmmm...
I'm adding your name to the cookie list, which presently includes you and singingbanana for his foolscap comic. Send me a PM with your address please. Thanks dude!