I also love the online-game atmosphere and slang use. The barrier really should keep this way since voice comunication between users doesn't mix with in-game sounds, and most gamers write l33t to talk each other. It doesn't affect the plot since users are never the characters here, just extras. All together this makes a l33t script for me, congratulations!
I tried to leave their appearances as open-ended as possible. In all honesty, they could likely be changed entirely to the staff's liking, and the scene would still work.
That was pretty funny. Good formatting and action descriptions too (I have trouble with keeping those short).
Your script brings up a lot of interesting issues... Giving the Users individual names and having them speak l33t makes them seem very recognizable as humans, but not to the heroes. That's very different from the old Reboot - but the old ReBoot was only that way because the present technology level didn't let people engage with each other on computers in a recognizably human way.
This is making me wonder whether the l33t option is better or worse than simply making the Users play in-character (they are RPing) and leave it at that. At least that would allow a solid story. Hmmm...
I'm adding your name to the cookie list, which presently includes you and singingbanana for his foolscap comic. Send me a PM with your address please. Thanks dude!
Oh, you made Matrix look at AndrAIa's breasts? You, bad boy! :-p lol But I don't think it fits Matrix's character. She has been wearing nothing but a bra for two seasons, if he was the kind of guy who forgets where is the face, he would have done it before. It's weird, it seems like he all of a sudden realized that she had breasts. There are two characters we saw eyeing another: Bob looking at Dot's tail and Hex looking at Bob's ASCII. I think we should keep that stuff for them. It would be like giving a broken car to Matrix. He could have a broken car, but it's so much more appropriate for Bob.
He should look at her in a general view respectfully, which means body AND face. And if AndrAIa says 'eyes up here', she should say it just to tease him, knowing he wasn't looking at her breast.
What does n00b mean exactly? Sorry, I never played online games before...
That's... more or less what I was trying to get across, with AndrAIa... >_>
About the game acknowledging them... This is supposed to be an ONLINE game, where you typically have to log-in in order to play. That's basically why I wrote that in there. That, and the Usernames bit, for Vector's entrance.
PolDesdePe... commented 4 years ago
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I also love the online-game atmosphere and slang use. The barrier really should keep this way since voice comunication between users doesn't mix with in-game sounds, and most gamers write l33t to talk each other. It doesn't affect the plot since users are never the characters here, just extras. All together this makes a l33t script for me, congratulations!
Shadowbolt commented 4 years ago
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I tried to leave their appearances as open-ended as possible. In all honesty, they could likely be changed entirely to the staff's liking, and the scene would still work.
Azalea commented 4 years ago
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What space attire is AndrAIa wearing?
MorganJ commented 4 years ago
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Well done!
Morgan
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Shadowbolt commented 4 years ago
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Yaaaaaaarrrb. Cookie. ^_^
TurtleDrea... commented 4 years ago
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LMAO at the user tattling to the Admin
Professor ... commented 4 years ago
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That was pretty funny. Good formatting and action descriptions too (I have trouble with keeping those short).
Your script brings up a lot of interesting issues... Giving the Users individual names and having them speak l33t makes them seem very recognizable as humans, but not to the heroes. That's very different from the old Reboot - but the old ReBoot was only that way because the present technology level didn't let people engage with each other on computers in a recognizably human way.
This is making me wonder whether the l33t option is better or worse than simply making the Users play in-character (they are RPing) and leave it at that. At least that would allow a solid story. Hmmm...
I'm adding your name to the cookie list, which presently includes you and singingbanana for his foolscap comic. Send me a PM with your address please. Thanks dude!
etoile37 commented 4 years ago
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Oh, you made Matrix look at AndrAIa's breasts? You, bad boy! :-p lol But I don't think it fits Matrix's character. She has been wearing nothing but a bra for two seasons, if he was the kind of guy who forgets where is the face, he would have done it before. It's weird, it seems like he all of a sudden realized that she had breasts. There are two characters we saw eyeing another: Bob looking at Dot's tail and Hex looking at Bob's ASCII. I think we should keep that stuff for them. It would be like giving a broken car to Matrix. He could have a broken car, but it's so much more appropriate for Bob.
He should look at her in a general view respectfully, which means body AND face. And if AndrAIa says 'eyes up here', she should say it just to tease him, knowing he wasn't looking at her breast.
What does n00b mean exactly? Sorry, I never played online games before...
aqualac commented 4 years ago
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Your "n00b" stuff totally cracked me up... seriously. My sis looked at me like I was completely random...
Shadowbolt commented 4 years ago
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That's... more or less what I was trying to get across, with AndrAIa... >_>
About the game acknowledging them... This is supposed to be an ONLINE game, where you typically have to log-in in order to play. That's basically why I wrote that in there. That, and the Usernames bit, for Vector's entrance.