ReBoot

Also an addition to Mistakes we Didn't Make, and the most important: We actually communicate with and take the fan's input very seriously. The fact that you consistently talked with us as well as acknowledge your changes makes you guys all the best out of the five pitches so far. Though I do regret not saying my input earlier, I do look forward to reading as well as critiquing your v.2 of your idea for ReBoot.

Well-said. It sounds like you have a really good grip on, well, what's going on. (Just s'long as you don't totally abandon The Hunt...)

You're doing a good job on this, really looking forward to your next verision.
I have one question; I haven't read about game cubes being mentioned, maybe I've just missed it, I assume that Gnosis has not grown out of game playing?

great to see you are recognizing your faults and want to fix things up. I for one know, I've complained and whined my way to almost start bashing you as the worst ReBoot story pitched so far.

I won't pass judgment again until I read your new proposal but as it stands right now. Reboot 2.0 has the best story. A new upgrade OS keeps the lore of all that is ReBoot. But gives a new setting and something fresh.

But I'm rooting for you guys since you actually interact with the community, not like ReBoot 2.0 team. They don't heart us =(

Good work!

You're doing good work man, keep it up!

I would really like it if you go more in-depth with the characterization and development. I do love that you are keeping the cast of the original, but I always loved Reboot not just for what it was, but for what it could be. You guys are great because of your interaction with the fans, and taking our comments into consideration. Great job guys, i'm probably going to vote for you guys.

This is absolutely fantastic the way you're developing this so quickly. The changes are all doing very well.

I myself think the Avatars could be perhaps less bulky? As reworks of sprites, maybe they could have a bit more of a creepy look rather than mechanical and brutish? The faces would be perfect for that though, very good idea to keep them without identity.

The artwork for them was gorgeous, but maybe design something that looks like it's a mindless slave that is both weak-looking yet very dangerous? It's an odd description. Maybe I can come up with some sketches.

I'm liking this pitch the most right now.

I still disagree with Gnosis, It doesn't work within the lore of the world. Systems are the world. they don't have conscience thought. If Gnosis was in a way- Well I can't really think of a better explination at the moment, like the Beast Planet from Shadow Raiders in that the Planet can consume and enslave other planets, but it's actually a group of bad guys running it.

And the main problem I had with your script was the dialogue, otehrwise everything would be fine. It's just down to dynamic characterization for getting the dialogue that you have to work.

I had an Idea for the origin of Gnosis. One of the comments in another post suggested that Gnosis be a rogue AI. Well I was thinking about how ReBoot has a history of doing parodies, so I was thinking that there could be a point in which a gamecube comes down and the game is a Tron parody. This would make the look and feel of Gnosis fit the story while still staying true to Reboot.