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I don't know if i post it on the correct category.... but I wrote a ReBoot's fic (my first fic in english, I'm spanish and I try to practise...)

I'd like you to give me their opinion, or tell me if I made any mistake...

Wearing, boys! Is a romantic fic between Enzo and AndrAIa during their game to game travel! I know, many of you don't like specially this stories...

Thanks!!!! :D

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6098322/1/The_AndrAIas_now_or_never_situation

  • Weeb92's Avatar

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    D'awww, I like it. It's short, sweet and a valiant attempt.

    I don't do fanfics, but all I can suggest is to keep writing them and see if you can get an English-speaking person to proof read it after you've written it. That way you will definitely improve!

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    • AndrAIa7805's Avatar

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      Thanks!!!!
      I'm writing actually my second (and more extense) fanfic!
      I hope, this method can help me with my english (one week ago, I was not able to say any english word!!!), while I enjoy and meet new people!

      Thanks again! :DD

  • anamolie's Avatar

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    It is interesting. I like it. It seems like a flashback.

    The english was okay to understand. You did good.

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    • AndrAIa7805's Avatar

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      Thaaanks!!! :D
      I'm very happy with the comments and with the fic's results!

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